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the moon looks alluring today
stars glorifying her beauty
the chill in the winter breeze
comforting my moist eyes.
the light from the search tower
hides the darkness from me
silence of the night intensifies my breathe
the race against my heartbeat is on.
recorded messages, photographs
her presence in my life is sealed
not even she can steal her from me
my wall, my desk, she claims all space!
i crave for a hug, the warmth was missing
she was teasing me, talking to me, in my laptop
i re-lived my memories, technology helps
but how would I feel those soft lips again?
she talks to me everyday
i am addicted to her voice
the sun doesn't set for me
unless I hear her say 'I love you'
have you ever fought with your self
to determine if you are fine or not?
have you ever tightened your grip
in fear of loosing some one in crowd?
seeking re-assurance should be a crime
why else would pain be correlated with it?
why else would this night deny me sleep?
why else would anxiety fail my trust?
the moon looks alluring today
stars glorifying her beauty
the chill in winter breeze soothes me
i know you are mine, I just miss you!
42 shouts!:
The craving, the longing.. very well expressed :)
Juhi, Thank you :)
the poem left a sad feeling in my heart..as if i understand the emotions..but obviously not "whys" and "hows" of it.. soooo we need to talk!!!
i crave for a hug, the warmth was missing
she was teasing me, talking to me, in my laptop..
So true.. with all the technology around, we still feel so lonely sometimes..
Ignite your soul with your perplexed mind
And yell at the cosmic world that you’ve flamed up your fears
Drizzle up yourself with holy water of life
And step your foot towards the ignited path, grabbing her hand…
Loved it :)
Beautiful narration...
I could think of people in my head. And if a writing sucks you in personally. Its a job well done. :)
Kisses.
Quite a romantic poem buddy!! :)
Aawey! So cute! :D
Awww...that longing feeling when we need the one so bad...
We only those whom we love the most
loved it :)
"her presence in my life is sealed
not even she can steal her from me"
So, true no one can rob the memories that we create, not even the person with whom we created. Beautifully penned.
Thank you for the comment :)
Looking forward to your next post :)
Love the pic and the poem. Hw r u doing?
Kajal, at times a sad feeling gives us a smile. its weird, but at some note its a good experience :)
Neha, very much! and that's when distance become a curse. thats when we realize that wut ever we have is just not enuf!! Thanks for stepping by Neha :)
Prasanth, I wish! and you know that better.
Sigsi, Thnx dear :)
Hemant, Thnx bro :)
LSL, thts really kind of you! thank you :)
Binu, emotions and memories are the only thing we shall never loose :P thanx bro :)
Trinaa, thnx yaar :)
Chintan, true! I am sure you know how hard it is to express :(
PS, i agree :)
Swati, its been long that Ive seen you here :) glad you are back. missed you!
Shas, as told to Binu, emotions and memories are the only thing we shall never loose. thnx dear!
Juhi, :)
Ria, thank you Ria! I am great. I am just being greedy here :P how are you?
Good one. Kudos to the imagery.
keep it goin;)
I missed this...:(
You know this one is vintage if you take out words like technology. The feel of this poem is so charming...
Love the way you played with words in first and last paragraph...
Absolutely right about your words when you said nobody, not even the one you were referring to can steal the memories, messages and photographs you stored safely in your heart. Awesome lines of poetry! Enjoyed going through the entire post.
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Amit, thank you bro :)
Saru, missed you here :) thank you ji!!
Elvirah, thank you :)
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Thank you once again for dropping by :) I'm glad you liked my work. Looking forward to your next post :)
love hain tho dard hain...dard hain tho love bhi hoga...
when u guys meeting for life yaar?
alka, thank you so very much :)
juhi, :)
vini, from the way it looks - never :)
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