Monday, August 31, 2009

love, tears & smile



he knew his words would scar her trust. he knew he was the reason for her tears. the world would throw stones on him. the world - silent spectators of a story unknown to them. he would smile through his wounds. tomorrow the world would smile with him and she would smile with the world. these tears would make her bold. these wounds would make her stronger than a man, these wounds would make her a woman. he never believed in destiny till he came face to face with the society. he had no faith in miracles and now he prays for one! he knows his intentions and he follows his heart. he might be wrong but this is a risk he has to take for tomorrow remains a mystery to them. he would smile through his wounds. tomorrow the world would smile with him and she would smile with the world.

*he is not a person who is difficult to change, he is just scared of the change.

32 comments:

R S said...

hii......
m new here..
read some of your posts...liked them specially the BSNL one.... infact was just read it when saw a new post popped up..

you weave words beautiful..

and nice template...I am now follwing you.. hope u visit my blog
cheers!!

Arv said...

very subtly put...

nice one mate..

take care... cheers...

preeti said...

brilliant trailing lines. liked it very much. this 'he' is who??? :):)
cheers matey :)

Margaret said...

love, tears & smiles - love often causes tears but those tears in turn often turn into smiles!

As long as 'he' follows his heart he's doing the right thing and destiny will let the world smile along with both of them.

Hope 'he' has the courage to fulfill his dreams.

Maggie :)

Manjari Singh said...

too deep!!

Senorita said...

Sawan...enna saara...ellam sukham allae ??

Lena said...

sometimes all you have to do to be happy is this one small change.. And the world would be brighter and life will not be the same... and everyone is happy... its worth taking the risk, trust me :)

Leo said...

hmm...
you smile, the world smiles with u and she smiles with the world..

that means in turn, she is smiling with u! :)

very thoughtful post Anil!
maybe his heart will lead him right!

happy onam! :)

Ria said...

that was really profound...loved the way u hav put it. :)

enchantinganki said...

i can completely relate to wat u have written :-)
the pain in the above lines are so evident...and intolerable...hats off to your attitude...

Parv Kaushik said...

amazing amazing amazing.. thts all i have to say for this piece!!! m giving the link of this article on my blog !!

keep blogging!

Meera said...

Okay.As you wish.
May your deeds bring happiness to you and the people around.

sawan said...

RS, welcome to this world of unbiased genuine relationships. thnx for ur words. i shall be visiting u soon.

sawan said...

Arv, thnx bro :)

sawan said...

Preeti, for everyone's happiness "he" shud be fiction. :)

sawan said...

Maggie, thnx for the wishes dear :)

sawan said...

Manjari, did ya like it? :)

sawan said...

Seno, ellam sukham thanne :)

sawan said...

Lena, I trust you, u knw it right? :)

sawan said...

Leo, thnx for the wishes bro :)

sawan said...

Ria, thnx grl :)

sawan said...

Anki, thnx grl :)

sawan said...

Parv, thnx bro :)

sawan said...

M, :-|

bondgal_rulz said...

A very well executed piece.

Loved it. As always. :)

Cheers

Ashwathy said...

wow!! that was a heavy dose...
now i'm not sure what to say only!!

Purva said...

but what if she gives up? Gives in to her tears so much that she forgets to smile?

sawan said...

Isha, thnx grl :)

sawan said...

Ash, say what u felt the first time u read it :P

sawan said...

Purva, maybe he would hold her and help her smile :)

Angel said...

I love this post ,beautiful! last line so impressive ;)

sawan said...

Angel, sounds similar? :P