This post is inspired by the prompt given by Sunday Scribblings.
Thanks to Meher for letting me know about the prompt :)
the shower of snow
fragrance of flowers
rainbow defining colors
the soothing wind
bliss is what i feel
content
this moment would last
till i breathe
'cos this moment
you are here!
30 comments:
Cos your presence makes this moment ever-so-dear. :D
me likes. :)
yeeeeeeeeeee!! i am here and i am the first one :D
welcome back sawan....
this was quite different from what you usually post....i liked the last line, resonates with my visit...
:( i doubt i was first
Beautiful & quite romantic...
I love it Sawan, it's beautiful...:)
sweet :)
Beautifully written, clearly heart felt. Loved it.
Well said Anil.. However, we (metro-ppl and soon the non-metro ones) are moving away from this thought.. :) Nice way to depict "the present".. And yes, we all are here :P
ahhh... that familiar much awaited moment :)
Have fun bro :)
Very nice...
Beautiful guru,,but you are not here..
awww so romantic.. Blore weather affect??
Sweet! :-)
Aayu, thnx dear :)
Chintan, thnki yaar :)
Chintan, well, second is equally sweet :)
Deepa, thnnk you :)
Saru, thank you yaar :)
Meher, awe thnx dear :)
Keith, thnx sir :)
Binu, wow, u r the one with a different perspective compared to the crowd! liked it :)
Arv, thnx bro :)
Priya, thnx dear :)
Angel, busy times :)
Nizzie, haha lol. kind of :P
Gauri, thnk u dear :)
'cos this moment you are here'
sometimes a moment is all it takes to take your breath away!! a moment it takes to loose yourself and rediscover life all over again.. because you are here...
Raka, cudn agree more :)
i am as of now definitely the last but am sure their will be some more after me...very nice post:)
Thanks Alka :)
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