shepherds
while in their fields
a bright glow hit the sky
then angels came to calm their fears
in life
singing
in words they shared peace, love and joy
night never seemed so bright
His soul was pure
Amen.
Attempted a Mirror Cinquain for the first time.
Cinquain -> a form with one 5-line stanza in a syllabic pattern of two, four, six, eight, two.
Reverse cinquain -> a form with one 5-line stanza in a syllabic pattern of two, eight, six, four, two.
Mirror cinquain -> a form with two 5-line stanzas consisting of a cinquain followed by a reverse cinquain.
36 comments:
Merry Christmas!!
Have a Merry Christmas..
Not too bad an attempt. :)
Very merry Christmas to you, Anil. Have a beautiful one =)
Merry Chistmas. Great work for a Cinquain.
sweet sweet sweet! Merry Chrsitmas Sawan :)
Merry Christmas buddy :) And thanks to this post, I learnt what is "Cinquain" :)
Merry Christmas :-)
Soulful lines Sawan ,so soothing to read on the Christ day,merry Christmas!hope you jingle all the way..
Merry Christmas!
Lovely Cinquain:)
Mithe, Merry Christmas :)
Angel, Merry Christmas to you too :)
Aayu, thanks dear :) Merry Christmas to you too!
Narcissist, thank you ji :)
Kajal, thank you dear :) Merry Christmas to you too!
Binu, haha thank you sir :) Merry Christmas.
Puji, Merry Christmas dear :)
Rohit, thank you bro! Merry Chritmas sir :)
Deepa, thank you ma'am :) Merry Christmas!
Nice composition :)
Merry Christmas to you too!
Such lovely words.
Since you r from Blore, you are special. Thank you for visiting Freebird.
I was in Blore for 5 years and recently moved to Gurgaon.
a pretty good attempt i wud say..am late here so belated merry xmas and wish u a happy and fun new year..
Anil, this is so beautiful. It is beautiful form of poetry and you wrote it exceptionally well. Simple yet profound!
lovely,
Merry Christmas
Thank you for dropping by :)
Didn't know about Cinquain before
hey! thanks for the visit :)
nice blog..
and nice post.. said it all. I hope you were blessed this Christmas! I did see angels around. :)
Oh and btw.. I didn't know what cinquain is. Thanks for sharing.
Beautifully written and well crafted! :)
Juhi, Thank you :)
Alka, really? :) i love Gurgaon, ive been there twice! Its really expensive there, aint it?
Alka, thank you ji. Happy New Year to you too :)
Saru, thank you ma'am :)
Nizzi, thank you ji :) happy new year to you.
Juhi, my pleasure :)
Pesto, :) i read it for the first time in some blog. I was curious and then read about it in detail before attempting this one :)
Sachi, thank you ji :)
Simran, thank you ji :)
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