Saturday, April 4, 2009

hazel eyes


engraved in rock is a pair of eyes,
deep and rusty, painted with life.

Angels dried tears from those eyes
a mystic blend of daze lingers!

lost in dreams, I gained myself -
captivated by those hazel eyes!

*****

Kajal completed 100 days in Blogsville. Congratulations to her :)

118 comments:

Netika Lumb said...

Wow..what a beautiful picture this is.. Really nice.
And this poem is definitely unconvenional. I mean I have read about eyes and all that, but the picture and the description and all are really nice..

Dhanya said...

Wow. Finally I am the first to comment in a blog. Congrats to me!! :D Yayyy!

Ok, jokes apart.. congratulations to Kajal for completing 100 days. God, I don't even remember when I started blogging :(

Whose hazel eyes are you referring to huh ? ;)

ARUNA said...

those hazel eyes r gorgeous!!!!!!!!!Reminds me of the song....
Broken up deep inside
But u won't get to see
the tears i cry
behind these hazel eyes!!

♀»$tuti™ ღ ... said...

u r an xcellent poet.........keep writing...there's always sumthing new in ur poem...........:)

sawan said...

Netika, thnx a lot dear :)wow, u stay awake at 2.43!! add me to gtlk, atlst i wud have company :)

sawan said...

dhanya, eh. close to first :) arrey u too stay awake at odd hours!! all you people stay awake at odd hours and here i think i am the only one :( why dnt u people add me to gtlk :( pavam njan, ottakirunnu bore adichite kidannurangan pokum :(

u dnt remember?? lemme guess: June 16, 2005?? mann, u r quite old :P hehe lol.. veise june is a beautiful month!! ask me why :) i was born in june :P

congratulations to kajal!! yeyy.

hazel eyes.. what?? u dnt have hazel eyes??? ooops need to change the verses then!! :P lol

u take care dhanya. have a grreeeaaatt weekend :)

sawan said...

Aruna, KELLY CLARKSON!!! man thats an amazing song :)

sawan said...

stuti, awww. u r becoming too kind on ur words lately :)thanx a lot dear :)and have a grt weekend :)

Margaret said...

Amazing what power a pair of eyes can have! Even eyes that have been engraved in rock for centuries give you the feeling, you're falling into a deep well, when staring into them.

"a mystic blend of daze lingers!"

Your poem Anil, is just as powerful as those eyes. Awesome...

sawan said...

margaret, thts so kind of u to tell that :) thanx a lot dear :) and yeah, eyes are just too powerful, they cud enlighten you, sink you, set you in fire, support you and even kill you!! you have a wonderful weekend there :)

Amrita~Ams said...

ahem ahem..hows hazal eyes???ummmmmmmm????
nice poem asusual :)

Chronicwriter said...

kajal has hazel eyes?

:)

congos to kajal

www.chronicwriter.com

Kartz said...

B-E-A-YOUUU-TY-FULLL...

Engraved, yet seemingly lifelike. Know what..? U just did a Keats a la the Grecian Urn... Uber!

Take care.

Peace. Have a wonderful weekend.

Scattered Thoughts... said...

Wow.. this is some thing even me liked :)) short and sweet.. whats up poet!! you too gonna have a book ??

Scattered Thoughts... said...

wow.. scroll in top of page for vin.. very thoughtful and imaginative :))

яノςんム said...

beautiful beautiful.. gr8 work dude.. i woner at times the ppl in blogville have a penchant for beauty :D

congos to Kajal.

Pallav said...

Pic rocks...
can i knw frm whr u get such nice thoughts for writing such beautiful poem....
arrr.. i m asking.... bas awey hiiii...

Yar its fantablous..

Kepp Writing....
:)
cheers

yamini meduri said...

beautiful are not just the eyes
also are the words you wrote
they are the perfect combination


nicely written sawan..!!!!

congratulations to KAJAL..!!!

Pallav said...

n n n ....
Congratulation to Kajal... how can i forget ths....

Hv fun...

Priya Joyce said...

lol on wat Chriz said

congozz to Kajal...

and believe me....Supaa work out there.

wazz the matter Anil u getting into poetry ??

WarmSunshine said...

sweet... almost soulful :)

the pink orchid said...

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh my God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sawan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

you know I am totally awestruck!!!

I dont even know what to say!! My eyes.....

Hey blogsville, Sawan took my eyes and gave them life!!!! Sawan I am totally speechless.... Oh My God!!!!

I Love You!!! and no matter how many times I say it, it's not gonna be enough.... God I am in tears.... It is the best thing (no wait) the second best thing that happened to me in the blogworld!!

Sawan you are my best friend and this is a testimony to the amazing bond that we share!!!


I LOVE YOU!!!!

VagaBond said...

Hazel eyes/Kajal Eyes...it actually rhymes ...i can b a poet 2!! :P

ANWESA said...

this was a master-stroke!!really!!
something strong enuf n well written..

vedshri said...

reali nice..n whn for kujju di..its gr88!!!!!!!

Tangerine said...

lovely poem ... as usual

congratulations to kajal.

Mayz said...

mujhe special order mila tha is post par comment karne ke liye...hehehe...

waise m glad that i was told to...its a beautiful dedication for a vy interestin person...

n a lovely pic chosen to go wid d post...thou beauty is always best in its natural form :)

Aniket said...

Loved it. Very beautifully written Sawan.

enchantinganki said...

beautiful dedication :)

enchantinganki~

IcE MaiDeN said...

hey.. first time here. awesome poem. short bt made me smile. nice! i like it! ill be back to read the rest of ur stuff.

Keep writing!

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

wowwww.. its one of ur best anizie.

congo to kajal

...nIShAntH... said...

Good one Sawan. :)

and congrats to Kajal who apparently is flying high .. :D

Diana said...

Captivating Anil....I admit..these lines are captivating for sure...loved each n every word of it...good work yaar...keep writing.
God bless.

Mads said...

congrats to kajal :D :D
and great work there...the pic is too good... :D

Luscious Sealed Lips said...

I Love how you have pictured hazel eyes on a rock.

Congratulations to Kajal.

Kisses.

Illeen said...

a sweet message.. :)

Leo said...

magical dedication anil! loved it! :)

congos calliope! :)

Vinnie said...

nice hazel eyes n all:)
Sawan saar...u put a scroll for me? thats sweet..do also visit me sometimes ...
http://vinsthepooh.blogspot.com/

thanks for the birthday wishes, yaar...this year i have blogger buddies too:)

Saranya said...

Beautifully described Sawan! Nicely written...keep up.
Congrats to Kajal.

bondgal_rulz said...

Beautiful poem and an equally beautiful pic. :)

You do amazing work with poetry ya. Keep penning. :)

Cheers

the pink orchid said...

@all: I have no words to express how glad I am ..

I am no princess,
I am no diamond,
but your love,
does make me feel,
like I am one of them,
a princess, a diamond!!


this was for all of you, especially sawan!!

thank you sooooo much!

Ria said...

nicely put!congrats to Kajal. :)

sawan said...

amrita, thnx dear :) hope u got ur answer from the rest of the comments :P

sawan said...

chris, u din know?? :P

sawan said...

kartz, bro, u mean the ballad types?? John Keats?? he wud have sued you if he lived today and read this comment :P thts such an honor coming from such a wonderful poet like ya :) thnx bro.

sawan said...

maheep, hehe, lol, m not very interested in spending money on something which wud return me nothing :) so no thoughts on book yet :P howz ya?

sawan said...

maheep. u liked it? :) she din see it :(

sawan said...

richa, thnx dear :) yeah, i know. just look around, u have so many quality works floating. m wondering why havnt anyone thought of publishing their works in the form of a book!!

sawan said...

pallav, thnx bro. i have these wonderful friends around me who inspires me with every word they say :) always thankful to the blogsville :)

sawan said...

yamini, thnx a lot dear :)

sawan said...

pallav, ah u dared to forget it?? :P

sawan said...

priya, hehe, stop laughing now :) kind of, feeling comfortable in this world of poetry. m sure u sighed now. no wudn bring in more pain, i shall try other things too :P

sawan said...

meher, thnk god, i thought u forgot this route :) thnx dear :)

sawan said...

kajal, u deserve this and much more. be happy girl, spread the smile :)

sawan said...

vagabound, u said it.. keep writing bro :)

sawan said...

anwesa, thnx dear :) happy tht u liked it :)

sawan said...

vedshri, lol, kujju?? :P hehe, thnx yaar.

sawan said...

tangerine, thnx dear :)

sawan said...

mayz, bro, order ke anusar aaye ho. welcome ji :) thnx for ur words bro :)

sawan said...

aniket, thnx bro :)

sawan said...

anki, thnx dear :)

sawan said...

annie, welcome here and thnx for ur kind words. m happy to bring tht smile on ur face. keep tht intact and have fun :) ill wait for ur comments on the rest of my posts :)

sawan said...

preetzie, thnx swthrt :)

sawan said...

nishanth, thnx bro :)

sawan said...

diana, thnx yaar. u take care and have fun. God bless you and every one you love :)

sawan said...

madhuri, thnx yaar :)

sawan said...

LSL, thnx a lot dear :)

sawan said...

Illeen, happy u liked it. take care girl :)

sawan said...

vinay, thnx bro :)

sawan said...

vinnie, u din see it :( i put it from morning to midnight!! oye, ive migrated from blog roll to reader. ur feed was not getting upadated in it. i checked it today and fixed it. sorry. wud read all pending posts :)

sawan said...

saranya, thnx yaar :)

sawan said...

isha, thnx a lot friend. ur words have always been kind on me :) u take care girl, have fun:)

sawan said...

kajal, you are worth more than a million diamond and a princess. keep smilling girl :)

sawan said...

ria, thnx dear :)

Keshi said...

beautiful pic n verse!

100 days in Blogville needs to be celebrated yes, considering the fact how many times I went n came bak lol! Congrattz to ur friend :)

Keshi.

Harshita said...

B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L ;)

The pic compliments the words really well...

Pretty Me!! said...

m captivated still ;)

Scattered Thoughts... said...

I thought I am bania but you are one step ahead :P

well looking at your followers and comments I don't think it will be a loss making deal :))

me good.. struggling hard between night and day shifts ;)

as for vin.. she was too busy complaining about your not coming to her blog that she didnt notice :P

Rajlakshmi said...

I simply got lost in the beauty of the eyes you so wonderfully painted here ...

lovely lines...

Kartz said...

Naah, not quite a ballad. But the parallelism was evident - of course, to those who have read Keats. * :P to those who haven't. ha!*

Arre bhai, I have a long way to go. The sky is my limit!

Thanks for the mention. :)

Ha ha, Keats won't sue me. Not to worry. He is way too rowh-maahn-tyc! ;)

Tc.

Peace. Have a nice day.

vedshri said...

yeah..kujju is da name given 2 her by me..
isn't it sweeeeet??

Veni said...

The pic is so captivating : )

A Poetess said...

beautiful lines there sawan...angelic eyes would have been a better title eh?

ki said...

I'M HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D

And what a poem to make my comeback with!!! Amazing!!!

swati said...

ur lines brought soul to those rocky eyes..soulful...:)

Siya said...

Wow! Amazing..!! Really!! :D :)

And congrats to Kajal!!! :D

sawan said...

keshi darlin, hehe, yeah yeah. and those words comin froma celebrity herself m sure kajal wud be happy :)

sawan said...

harshita, thnx a lot dear :)

sawan said...

pratzi,wow, thnx swty :)

sawan said...

maheep, hehe struggling between night and day shift?? do i hear a husband complaining :P lol, neha r ya listening??? yeah yeah, vinnie seems to be very busy :) the problem was with the feed updated in my reader. it refused to let me know tht she is updating her blog :( ive hanged it, hopefully she would have less reasons to complain now :)

sawan said...

rajlakshmi, that compliments my words, thnx dear :) i was also lost before i wrote it :D

sawan said...

kartz, bro, hehe, agian u r being modest tellin about ya :P lol.. u take care bro. have loadz of fun.. and wut bout the get togtr?? [rolling eyes]

sawan said...

vedshri, kujju is definitely a sweeeeet name :P something like laddu :P lol

sawan said...

veni, and words?? :( hehe lol kajal wud be flying high i guess :)

sawan said...

poetes, yeah i know. at first i never thought tht kajal wud identify these eyes :) so i wanted to make it as abstract as possible, but she did :D

sawan said...

keee, i mised ya all this while :) thnx dear :)

Scattered Thoughts... said...

dude.. wait till Mrs. Sawan comes in picture.. and then we will see.. I am counting and chun chun ke badla lunga :))

Little Girl Lost said...

deep and rusty, painted with life.


loved those lines. beautiful. and the picture too.
but not happy with you. you've given up visiting my blog. you get over here right now and read my poem, hear me?!! :)

Margaret said...

Hi Anil

There's an award waiting for you to pick up over at my blog :)

sawan said...

maheep, bro, spare me pls :D maaf kardena yaar :P

sawan said...

LGL, ayyoda, sorry dear. i am yet to arrange my reader with priorities. still working on it :( ive read all your posts which i missed and promise tht i wud be ter on time from now :) now smile :D

sawan said...

swati, thnx dear :)

sawan said...

Siya, thnx dear :) kajal, did ya hear tht?? :P

sawan said...

Margaret, its such an honor! thnk u so very much.. i am all smiles :)

the pink orchid said...

@all: oh my god! each comment has made my blogging century so special!! thank you sawan! :) i feel so loved..!!

you are the sweetest!

hugs!!

sawan said...

kajal, u deserve all these love :)

Meera said...

Congs to kajal,though a lil late :)
Loved the 1st two lines a lot...and the pic is too good.
U definitely gave life to the pic!

Shimmer said...

that was s nice poem :)
i usually run away frm readin poetry (:P), but short ones r an exception (;))

i liked it a lot :D

kajal nd her 100 days,, hmmm.. she has some talent, doesn't she :) (god bless her)

Gauri Mathur said...

B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!!!
:-))

Femin Susan said...

Beautifully poignant, and beautifully expressed poem. Thanks for sharing.....

sawan said...

meera, thts so swet of u :) thnx a lot :)

sawan said...

shimmer, yes she does :) god bless you too :)

sawan said...

gauri, thnx swthrt :)

sawan said...

femin, thnx dear :)

Wendy Naisa said...

Hi Sawan, just found your blog and this poem. I'm captivated by the picture and may well try and write a little something about it myself. It's an amazing piece of poetry in a number of ways, not least that it's very close to what I'm attempting to achieve at The American Sandwich -Andy Sewina

sawan said...

Hi Sewina, welcome here :) i wud definitely chock out The American Sadwich. there is something in tha name which tells me that its gona be delicious :) thnx for you words. u take care :)

lafemmereva said...

hey first of all the pic is awesome!!! the poem is also good!

sawan said...

revati, thnx grl :)