Sunday, May 17, 2009

words - the unconventional way

the silence around deprives me of my sleep
I smile when I read "1 new msg received"!
the moon up above has a sarcastic smile
the bats and those owls think I am insane
for why have I chosen to be here in the balcony
when I should have been in my bed, having blissful dreams!
I tell them "I miss her" and they give me this look - 
"addiction ain't easy - grass, pills or love"
I miss her like crazy, wish she was here!
let the wind hear me and echo my prayer.

PS: I thought of writing about politics today. But then I thought I would wait till the CPI[M] Polit Bureau meeting scheduled to happen this 18th and 19th. I would have more to write then! :)

111 comments:

The Pink Orchid said...

aweeeeeeeee sawan.. is it enough if i say 'i understand' :)

it is not just another poetic expression of 'i miss you' its more.. it is real.. it is actual.. the detailing says so.. :)

i say - god bless! sleep well ;)

sawan said...

kajal, you are a swthrt :)and you know why i call ya 'luv guru' :) god bless ya too kajal. u too sleep well.

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

its such a nice and simply put thought:)....really liked it...
thats one heck of a technically page you got...and along with that...a follower too...in me:D

lydia said...

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Devilish Angel said...

Modernistic poem :) It's as if you really felt it. I don't know if you really did or not but it is very real.

Phoenix said...

its really beautiful.. i loved the words.. :)

Illeen said...

Beautiful lines.. made me mellow :)

ANWESA said...

wow!!!
so so so desperate....just like me..

WarmSunshine said...

That was a cute one Anil :)

I'm slowly falling in love with ur cute poetry :)

Rakesh Vanamali said...

Brilliant feeling to sleep under the night sky!

Well written!

Do check out my take on the elections on http://almostsunday.blogspot.com/2009/05/i-in-ballot.html

Nidzzi said...

nice poem . when u miss her u forget if its dream or reality. wait is more dear. her images, flash back looks real.

ABHISHEK SiM said...

loved the line - "addiction ain't easy - grass, pills or love".

Renu M said...

next one, write a poem hiding her name in ur verses...aahhhaaa..who is that lucky lady there :)

яノςんム said...

hehe, now i know wwhat does it actually mean.. :P

lovely!!

Netika Lumb said...

awww.. this is so sweet. Someone has been losing sleep han ;)
Good for you :)

Arv said...

nostalgic :(

and nice too mate... take care.. cheers...

Velu said...

I don't really write poems and I did't like this one. Sorry. Will wait for the post on the elections.

Cheers,
Velu

Margaret said...

When we love someone, all we want is to be with that person, every minute of the day.
Your poem emphasises this in a beautiful way.
I hope the wind carries your love across the miles and lands gently at its goal..

Little Girl Lost said...

anil- *BIG hug* :)

you are so right addiction ain't easy... iunderstand completely :)

will be waiting for your take on the election results. maybe you can write an obituary for Karat (he'll need just that after the polit bureau meet)

bengali's are still in a state of shock. the one line i'm hearing everywhere is- 'how did this happen??!!'

hilarious :D

ps- come and read...

pinkZz said...

very very cute.....

words say it all.. really marvellous..!

enchantinganki said...

from some of the previous posts..i have a feeling tat u r in lurveeeeee...hehheheh!!

mast likha as always..

Scattered Thoughts... said...

so how many owls and bats are your friend already? did you already started giving name to them?

and do they miss you when you are not there for a change?

Diya said...

That was sweet :)

Ashwathy said...

premam asthikku pidichittulla lakshanam aanallo maashe! :)

anyway beautifully written. completely understand ur thots. keep it coming!!

Harshita said...

"addiction ain't easy - grass, pills or love" : best of all... Loved this line...

:) Nice post... and I will wait for that post on politics too.

bondgal_rulz said...

Damn! I soo wish I had a bf abhi...who lived in some far-off city...just so that I could have sent this amazing poem across!! *sigh*

Kartz said...

Talk of thoughts in motion! ;)

Beautiful, bro'! Loved that liner on addiction! :D

Peace.

---
Catch u online sometime?

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

"addiction ain't easy - grass, pills or love" ........ so very beautiful and is a darn truth.

beautiful poem anizie.

but as of now preetzie is missing u in her blog :)

Vinnie said...

love aint easy, my friend..love aint easy!

btw, cute poem:)

Tabitha said...

Really sweet..

Aditi..............:) said...

I totally loved this poem!! :)
Is it fiction or...:P
Well, I will wait for the post about politics!

Ria said...

tht was so sweet!! i loved it. :)

kim said...

WOW!!! seems my story... :)

sujata said...

words are coming easy now..good, liked the line on the smile at getting a text!! its very real.

swati said...

Take care sawan...it was beautiful..n true too..

Meera said...

:) I am smiling wide :) :)

And loved the pic! Take care.

ki said...

Hope she liked it. :) :) :)

Kadambari said...

Beautiful poem!! :)

usha said...

addiction is sweet.
de-addiction is what is not all that easy, i feel!

Pretty Me!! said...

i just loved the poem !! simple n so very sweet ..


I smile when I read "1 new msg received"!


i really smiled thinking of reading those love filled messages !

rahul said...

really nice lines!!

Cursed♪♫ said...

So cute!!
Lovely !!! :)
The pictures good too!
Check out my new post!

Babli said...

Thanks a lot for visiting my blog and giving lovely comment.
I liked your blog very much.You have written a very beautiful poem and the words are very touching.

Keshi said...

Sawan turning super-senti n all ha! ;-)

Nice!

Keshi.

Kanupriya said...

I smile when I read "1 new msg received"! - Lovely & very natural :-)

Newbie Mommy said...

Real good stuff. Truly madly deeply ;)

ash89 said...

awww...thats a nice poem! Depicts exactly what one feels when in love!

The Geekie said...

i see cutesy stuffs in most blogs this week :)

lovely lines

Gauri Mathur said...

Very Innocent and heartfelt lines.!!
Great work,,Bhaiya!
:)
Hugs*

Diva said...

I loved the way love was blended into those words... great writing :)

Cess said...

who is she? :P it was a very nice poem, haven t been here around much, bit depressed since i left India ;( I hope u re doing all right.
Take care
C.

sawan said...

Richa, thts so sweet of ya :) keep coming mate. god bless ya :)

sawan said...

Lydia, thnx grl :)

sawan said...

Divya, I still have to grow old to write so deep feelings out of fiction :) the emotions are real, thnx grl.

sawan said...

Raka, thnx grl :)

sawan said...

Illen, awwe, thnx grl :)

sawan said...

Anwesa, yeyy same pinch :)

sawan said...

Meher, slowly?? i thought u already loved them :P god bless ya grl :)

sawan said...

Rakesh, would sure do bro :)

sawan said...

Nidzzi, you speak the truth :) thnx for ur luvly words dear.

sawan said...

Abhishek, thnx bro :)

sawan said...

Renu, you mised that poem swty, ive already done that :)

sawan said...

Richa, :) now u know now u know :)

sawan said...

Netika, thnx mate :)

sawan said...

Arv, thnx bro :)

sawan said...

Velu, the post on elections is up bro. would love to have ur take on that.

sawan said...

Margaret, i hope so too dear. thnx for ur words :)

sawan said...

Amrit, miss ya these days. wer are ya? thnx grl :) and i know tht u undrstnd the feel completely :)

sawan said...

Vedz, thnx swty :)

sawan said...

Anki, ur felings say the truth :) thnx dearie :)

sawan said...

maheep, bro, aapke muh se ek pyara shabth nikalu tho mera din ban jaaye :) managers i tell ya!! :) pyar mein hu sir, thoda encouragement do, nahi tho bhabhi se complaint kar doonga :P

sawan said...

diya, thnx dear :)

sawan said...

Ash, pedicha polokke thanneya :) itrakke nannayi manasilaakkunna sthithikke avideyum ithokke thanneyaane avastha ennu viswasichotte? :P

sawan said...

Harshita, yey, thnx grl :)

sawan said...

Isha, hehe lol.. r u tryin to tell me tht u dnt have a bf or ur bf dsnt stay in a far of city? :P

sawan said...

Kartz, bro, egjatly :) thnx. and yes. wen u flyin?

sawan said...

Preetzie, oo preetzie, sorry yaar.. blame it on ma work.. my reader shows 498 unread posts :(

sawan said...

Vinnie darlin, thnx ma'am :)

sawan said...

Tabitha, thn dearie :)

sawan said...

Aditi, thnx girlie, it aint fiction :) the post on politics is up :)

sawan said...

Ria, thnx girlie :)

sawan said...

Kim, yeyy, same pinch :)

sawan said...

Sujatha, yes it iss :) thnx dear!!

sawan said...

Swati, thnx dear. have fun :)

sawan said...

Meera, I so love you!! :)

sawan said...

Kirti, she wrote she is smiling :)

sawan said...

Kadambari, thnx dear :)

sawan said...

Usha, well said.. !! u take care dear.

Aarthi said...

This was superb!!

Loved it completely... :)

Cheers
*PEACE*

Lena said...

i skipped it :P

I am honest :D

sawan said...

Pratzi, awwe, wish those smile stays for ever :) thnx grl.

sawan said...

Rahul, thnx bro.

sawan said...

Juhi, Thnx grl. Wud surely do!

sawan said...

Babli, thnx dearie :)

sawan said...

Keshi darlin, yeah yeah, blame it on the love bug :)

sawan said...

Priya, thnx girl :)

sawan said...

Bindu, welcome here :) Thnx for ur words dear :)

sawan said...

Ash, thnx grl :)

sawan said...

Geekie, hehe, lol seems like the luv bug is making its rounds :P

sawan said...

Gauri, thnx sweety :) hope things are wonderful with ya! hugz

sawan said...

Diva, thnx grl :)

sawan said...

Cessie, omg, hw are ya sweetie?? workout and all?? :) awwe dnt be depresed, u cud come back any day!! and she? :) wud tell u wen i cya online :) u too take care hons :)

sawan said...

Aarthi, thnx grl :)

sawan said...

Lena darlin, :) i know u r honest! busy busy grl??

Creativity!! said...

Beautiful Fantastic Description :)

sawan said...

Sahana [i am guessin thts ur name], thnx grl :)

state of mind? said...

just love the first line....silence is never silent...it always very loud...but its just that we are deaf to it...

can understand ur feelings dude....

sawan said...

state of mind, thnx yaar. u take care.

bondgal_rulz said...

All I was trying to tell you was that your poem was SOO beautiful that I would not have minded having a bf in a far off place, just so that I could copy and say your b'ful lines. :P

Ab samjha ?? :P

sawan said...

samaj gaya swty :)

Angel said...

a sane human being naturally feels like you do ! It's indeed a beautiful feeling though sometimes one appear like your 're lunatic..haha.