the silence around deprives me of my sleep
I smile when I read "1 new msg received"!
the moon up above has a sarcastic smile
the bats and those owls think I am insane
for why have I chosen to be here in the balcony
when I should have been in my bed, having blissful dreams!
I tell them "I miss her" and they give me this look -
"addiction ain't easy - grass, pills or love"
I miss her like crazy, wish she was here!
let the wind hear me and echo my prayer.
PS: I thought of writing about politics today. But then I thought I would wait till the CPI[M] Polit Bureau meeting scheduled to happen this 18th and 19th. I would have more to write then! :)
111 comments:
aweeeeeeeee sawan.. is it enough if i say 'i understand' :)
it is not just another poetic expression of 'i miss you' its more.. it is real.. it is actual.. the detailing says so.. :)
i say - god bless! sleep well ;)
kajal, you are a swthrt :)and you know why i call ya 'luv guru' :) god bless ya too kajal. u too sleep well.
its such a nice and simply put thought:)....really liked it...
thats one heck of a technically page you got...and along with that...a follower too...in me:D
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Modernistic poem :) It's as if you really felt it. I don't know if you really did or not but it is very real.
its really beautiful.. i loved the words.. :)
Beautiful lines.. made me mellow :)
wow!!!
so so so desperate....just like me..
That was a cute one Anil :)
I'm slowly falling in love with ur cute poetry :)
Brilliant feeling to sleep under the night sky!
Well written!
Do check out my take on the elections on http://almostsunday.blogspot.com/2009/05/i-in-ballot.html
nice poem . when u miss her u forget if its dream or reality. wait is more dear. her images, flash back looks real.
loved the line - "addiction ain't easy - grass, pills or love".
next one, write a poem hiding her name in ur verses...aahhhaaa..who is that lucky lady there :)
hehe, now i know wwhat does it actually mean.. :P
lovely!!
awww.. this is so sweet. Someone has been losing sleep han ;)
Good for you :)
nostalgic :(
and nice too mate... take care.. cheers...
I don't really write poems and I did't like this one. Sorry. Will wait for the post on the elections.
Cheers,
Velu
When we love someone, all we want is to be with that person, every minute of the day.
Your poem emphasises this in a beautiful way.
I hope the wind carries your love across the miles and lands gently at its goal..
anil- *BIG hug* :)
you are so right addiction ain't easy... iunderstand completely :)
will be waiting for your take on the election results. maybe you can write an obituary for Karat (he'll need just that after the polit bureau meet)
bengali's are still in a state of shock. the one line i'm hearing everywhere is- 'how did this happen??!!'
hilarious :D
ps- come and read...
very very cute.....
words say it all.. really marvellous..!
from some of the previous posts..i have a feeling tat u r in lurveeeeee...hehheheh!!
mast likha as always..
so how many owls and bats are your friend already? did you already started giving name to them?
and do they miss you when you are not there for a change?
That was sweet :)
premam asthikku pidichittulla lakshanam aanallo maashe! :)
anyway beautifully written. completely understand ur thots. keep it coming!!
"addiction ain't easy - grass, pills or love" : best of all... Loved this line...
:) Nice post... and I will wait for that post on politics too.
Damn! I soo wish I had a bf abhi...who lived in some far-off city...just so that I could have sent this amazing poem across!! *sigh*
Talk of thoughts in motion! ;)
Beautiful, bro'! Loved that liner on addiction! :D
Peace.
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Catch u online sometime?
"addiction ain't easy - grass, pills or love" ........ so very beautiful and is a darn truth.
beautiful poem anizie.
but as of now preetzie is missing u in her blog :)
love aint easy, my friend..love aint easy!
btw, cute poem:)
Really sweet..
I totally loved this poem!! :)
Is it fiction or...:P
Well, I will wait for the post about politics!
tht was so sweet!! i loved it. :)
WOW!!! seems my story... :)
words are coming easy now..good, liked the line on the smile at getting a text!! its very real.
Take care sawan...it was beautiful..n true too..
:) I am smiling wide :) :)
And loved the pic! Take care.
Hope she liked it. :) :) :)
Beautiful poem!! :)
addiction is sweet.
de-addiction is what is not all that easy, i feel!
i just loved the poem !! simple n so very sweet ..
I smile when I read "1 new msg received"!
i really smiled thinking of reading those love filled messages !
really nice lines!!
So cute!!
Lovely !!! :)
The pictures good too!
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Thanks a lot for visiting my blog and giving lovely comment.
I liked your blog very much.You have written a very beautiful poem and the words are very touching.
Sawan turning super-senti n all ha! ;-)
Nice!
Keshi.
I smile when I read "1 new msg received"! - Lovely & very natural :-)
Real good stuff. Truly madly deeply ;)
awww...thats a nice poem! Depicts exactly what one feels when in love!
i see cutesy stuffs in most blogs this week :)
lovely lines
Very Innocent and heartfelt lines.!!
Great work,,Bhaiya!
:)
Hugs*
I loved the way love was blended into those words... great writing :)
who is she? :P it was a very nice poem, haven t been here around much, bit depressed since i left India ;( I hope u re doing all right.
Take care
C.
Richa, thts so sweet of ya :) keep coming mate. god bless ya :)
Lydia, thnx grl :)
Divya, I still have to grow old to write so deep feelings out of fiction :) the emotions are real, thnx grl.
Raka, thnx grl :)
Illen, awwe, thnx grl :)
Anwesa, yeyy same pinch :)
Meher, slowly?? i thought u already loved them :P god bless ya grl :)
Rakesh, would sure do bro :)
Nidzzi, you speak the truth :) thnx for ur luvly words dear.
Abhishek, thnx bro :)
Renu, you mised that poem swty, ive already done that :)
Richa, :) now u know now u know :)
Netika, thnx mate :)
Arv, thnx bro :)
Velu, the post on elections is up bro. would love to have ur take on that.
Margaret, i hope so too dear. thnx for ur words :)
Amrit, miss ya these days. wer are ya? thnx grl :) and i know tht u undrstnd the feel completely :)
Vedz, thnx swty :)
Anki, ur felings say the truth :) thnx dearie :)
maheep, bro, aapke muh se ek pyara shabth nikalu tho mera din ban jaaye :) managers i tell ya!! :) pyar mein hu sir, thoda encouragement do, nahi tho bhabhi se complaint kar doonga :P
diya, thnx dear :)
Ash, pedicha polokke thanneya :) itrakke nannayi manasilaakkunna sthithikke avideyum ithokke thanneyaane avastha ennu viswasichotte? :P
Harshita, yey, thnx grl :)
Isha, hehe lol.. r u tryin to tell me tht u dnt have a bf or ur bf dsnt stay in a far of city? :P
Kartz, bro, egjatly :) thnx. and yes. wen u flyin?
Preetzie, oo preetzie, sorry yaar.. blame it on ma work.. my reader shows 498 unread posts :(
Vinnie darlin, thnx ma'am :)
Tabitha, thn dearie :)
Aditi, thnx girlie, it aint fiction :) the post on politics is up :)
Ria, thnx girlie :)
Kim, yeyy, same pinch :)
Sujatha, yes it iss :) thnx dear!!
Swati, thnx dear. have fun :)
Meera, I so love you!! :)
Kirti, she wrote she is smiling :)
Kadambari, thnx dear :)
Usha, well said.. !! u take care dear.
This was superb!!
Loved it completely... :)
Cheers
*PEACE*
i skipped it :P
I am honest :D
Pratzi, awwe, wish those smile stays for ever :) thnx grl.
Rahul, thnx bro.
Juhi, Thnx grl. Wud surely do!
Babli, thnx dearie :)
Keshi darlin, yeah yeah, blame it on the love bug :)
Priya, thnx girl :)
Bindu, welcome here :) Thnx for ur words dear :)
Ash, thnx grl :)
Geekie, hehe, lol seems like the luv bug is making its rounds :P
Gauri, thnx sweety :) hope things are wonderful with ya! hugz
Diva, thnx grl :)
Cessie, omg, hw are ya sweetie?? workout and all?? :) awwe dnt be depresed, u cud come back any day!! and she? :) wud tell u wen i cya online :) u too take care hons :)
Aarthi, thnx grl :)
Lena darlin, :) i know u r honest! busy busy grl??
Beautiful Fantastic Description :)
Sahana [i am guessin thts ur name], thnx grl :)
just love the first line....silence is never silent...it always very loud...but its just that we are deaf to it...
can understand ur feelings dude....
state of mind, thnx yaar. u take care.
All I was trying to tell you was that your poem was SOO beautiful that I would not have minded having a bf in a far off place, just so that I could copy and say your b'ful lines. :P
Ab samjha ?? :P
samaj gaya swty :)
a sane human being naturally feels like you do ! It's indeed a beautiful feeling though sometimes one appear like your 're lunatic..haha.
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