through the mist, a colored hue
flickered at a whim, she flutter her wings
stripes and colors brightening her day
she wakes the flower with a kiss on his cheeks!
tender and fragile, she touches the petals
he sways at her music, dancing in the breeze!
vibrant orange rimmed her wings
orchid dark purple rings.
she sang and danced to his favorite tune
enjoying the breeze against her wings
and as he closes his eyes, poised
sinking in the love, she flies!
for this life is too short to stay
counted in moments, it has its pace
fluttering her wings she has to leave
across the horizon, where her heart is calm!
41 comments:
Where her heart is calm...*sigh*
picture well combined :>
lovely one Sawan
Kajal, :)
Dip, thnx :)
Nizzie, thnx hein ji :)
so calm and lovely ..so poetic ..Greetings from Oman
can i say its awesome? or should i look for any other word??
beautiful one Sawan :)
I just love the flow from one line to another and of course the thought is super beautiful...
I loved how you ended it.. Beautiful piece :)
Nasra, thank you ji :)
Yamini, youve always been kind! thank you :)
Saru, thanx hein ji :)
Juhi, thnk u ji :)
Beautiful composition!!
Why no capitalization btw?
AWWW! so cute! Love it! :)
Your newest follower and regular visitor :)
the tenderness and the gentleness was fantastically expressed :)
nice read
last lines are superb,,:)
Isha dear, thank you :) i din want to emphasize on any special word or feel. its one thought and one flow. it was a subtle note, rather a sad subtle note :) i din want to bring in too much attention to the feelings. hope tht answers you.
Jen, thank you dear :)
Jyoti, thnx for the kind words :)
Ruchi, i am glad you felt so :) thank you.
Love the choice of pic...and the last para.
Hi Sawan,
I usually read only food blogs. But I truly believe it was some intangible power that brought me to your blog. You have a brilliant blog! :) I'm not a master of words like you are; but I hope I can convey how awesomely awesome I think you are! :D This poem just brightened my day! :)
Cheers!
And I'll probably need a whole day to read and fully experience the writings in this blog. :)
Came here... After long time.. Nice post...
Miss all my blog frnds alot... Wanna come back to my dream life.. :-)
Sahityika
Beautiful writing!
Thank you so much for the comment :) Hope to see you around :)
I love the way you have created the delicate and pretty image of the beautiful butterfly.
Very beautiful! Just came across your blog.. :)
Where her heart is calm.. Wonderful!!
Ria, thank you :)
Kavi, that was very encouragin! thank you :)
Sahityika, please do come back.
Rahul, Thank you :)
Juhi, any time girl :)
D, thank you ji :)
I do, I shall rather call you the oceanic smile :) thnk you for your kind comment and welcome here :)
as always you poured your heart.
Swati, at times all we could do is communicate. and yet we fail to do that for reasons known to us. all i could do now is express and believe that these expressions would win me my love one day. trust is all i have. gauge the depth of helplessness and you'll realize the pain.
ABSOLUTELY mindblowing. attractive.
GP, thank you ji :)
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