Sunday, April 22, 2012

dazzle


my eyes fail me today, misleading
for i see the shades not meant for me
the ardor of the rays blinding me
and all i see is you - mirage!

the vacuum ahead blow my sense
memories flash before me
on a blurry canvas
i stand searching your face

the moment i held your hand
remember the rush around?
and yet we felt our eyes talking
everything around, slowed down for us!

broken thoughts invade my mind
hazy lines of vision stares at you
leaving me stumble through the dark alone
its all about you and me.

a drop of tear, love
cleanse me from my sin
some day our auras will merge
and it will never be too late.



22 comments:

eprilis said...

Loved every word! Btw, I use NikonD3100:)

And, I followed you. :)

alka narula said...

broken thoughts invade my mind
hazy lines of vision stares at you
leaving me stumble through the dark alone,its all about you and me.
beautiful sawan !

Blahblaholic ♥ © said...

This is BEAUTIFUL!
Loved the last lines :)

Rià said...

Love the random feel of the pic...and love the last para.

♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ said...

Memories..and how they make everything hazy :)
Beautiful!

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

Anize..tu ho sake to rozz aise hi likkha kar. but then i know aise feelings kabhi kabhi hi kagaz pe utar pati hai. May God bless you with the ability to pen such lovely feelings on regular basis if not daily. :) <3

deeps said...

The dazzle is just momentary ha?

Apurva said...

something which we all feel at some point in our lives.. :)

♥ Golden Pink ♥ said...

beautiful words there. i found them different.
and last para is my fav. splly the last line.

sawan said...

eprilis, thank you :) nice! kit lens?

sawan said...

alka, thank you ji :)

sawan said...

B, thank you :)

sawan said...

Ria, thnx dear!

sawan said...

Juhi, thnx :)

sawan said...

Pretty, thnx swthrt :)

sawan said...

Deeps, i wish it was. unfortunately or fortunately its not.

sawan said...

Apurva, sure :)

sawan said...

GP, thnx dear :)

♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ said...

No post coming up? :)

sawan said...

Juhi, would come up son. this time, most probably something different :P

Oksa said...

So great!!! I love it.

Oksa said...

That's sooo great. I LOVE it :)