Sunday, April 22, 2012

dazzle


my eyes fail me today, misleading
for i see the shades not meant for me
the ardor of the rays blinding me
and all i see is you - mirage!

the vacuum ahead blow my sense
memories flash before me
on a blurry canvas
i stand searching your face

the moment i held your hand
remember the rush around?
and yet we felt our eyes talking
everything around, slowed down for us!

broken thoughts invade my mind
hazy lines of vision stares at you
leaving me stumble through the dark alone
its all about you and me.

a drop of tear, love
cleanse me from my sin
some day our auras will merge
and it will never be too late.



22 comments:

liz said...

Loved every word! Btw, I use NikonD3100:)

And, I followed you. :)

Unknown said...

broken thoughts invade my mind
hazy lines of vision stares at you
leaving me stumble through the dark alone,its all about you and me.
beautiful sawan !

Nirati said...

This is BEAUTIFUL!
Loved the last lines :)

Rià said...

Love the random feel of the pic...and love the last para.

♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ said...

Memories..and how they make everything hazy :)
Beautiful!

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

Anize..tu ho sake to rozz aise hi likkha kar. but then i know aise feelings kabhi kabhi hi kagaz pe utar pati hai. May God bless you with the ability to pen such lovely feelings on regular basis if not daily. :) <3

deeps said...

The dazzle is just momentary ha?

Apurva said...

something which we all feel at some point in our lives.. :)

Unknown said...

beautiful words there. i found them different.
and last para is my fav. splly the last line.

Anil Sawan said...

eprilis, thank you :) nice! kit lens?

Anil Sawan said...

alka, thank you ji :)

Anil Sawan said...

B, thank you :)

Anil Sawan said...

Ria, thnx dear!

Anil Sawan said...

Juhi, thnx :)

Anil Sawan said...

Pretty, thnx swthrt :)

Anil Sawan said...

Deeps, i wish it was. unfortunately or fortunately its not.

Anil Sawan said...

Apurva, sure :)

Anil Sawan said...

GP, thnx dear :)

♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ said...

No post coming up? :)

Anil Sawan said...

Juhi, would come up son. this time, most probably something different :P

Oksa said...

So great!!! I love it.

Oksa said...

That's sooo great. I LOVE it :)