darkness surround me.
the chillness in wind freeze my blood.
stars appear as tiny dots. far away. faded.
i search for the moon, the frame of the building blocks my view. no hope.
i stand with my eyes open. i dont see light.
i shiver, not sure if its the cold or the fear.
i closed my eyes and listen.
fluttering of leaves - there is air to breathe.
a faint voice of laughter - far away i hear life.
the calmness was broken by the screeching of wheels -
few metres away, a train crossed the bridge.
i could hear it gaining momentum, carying hundreds towards their destiny.
hundreds who chose to fight their fear for their goals. hope.
i stand with my eyes closed. i see light.
i shiver, now sure that its the cold.
i opened my eyes. nothing has changed except that now I smile.
30 comments:
Awww..last line was killer..
Hope everything's well with you now :)
and now thats positive :D
that was beautiful!
beautifully written!! :)
I like this a lot. :)
Netika, u first!! wow :) thnx dear. all well, or atleast i like to believe tht way :)
Meera, Thnx dear :) I wish to see either of ur blog live and with action. and the other one for which u gave me permissions, looks like u revoked the permissions :P
Shravan, yes it was :) hwz u bro?
Manjari, thnx dear :)
Ria, thnx dear :)
Ki, thnx sweets :)
Awesome!!
Seriously.. its beautiful :)
I loved the last line.
thats a very beautiful ending... beautifully penned :)
Thats a great one especially with the timing of this post...right in time with the Christmas festivity and the season of hope & joy!!
Merry Christmas to you and thanks for the change notification in ur post..I've also set up a redirecting thingy from the old set up. Hope this helps!
Cheers.
very interesting and lovely!!! loved the ending!! good work!
Nice thoughts.. Beautifully written.
can you inject me with ur positivity :)
loved it!
Beautiful words were woven beautifully. I liked the last line. :)
Best wishes.
You have been tagged :)
Meera, ohkies, new online diary? :) nice. its safe than a paper diary. do write, blogsville wud never be complete without its authors.
Satyu, thnx girl :)
Anwesa, i loved it too :)
Lakshmi, thnx dear :)
Poetess, u have a wonderful and eventful new year dear :)
Parv, thnx bro :)
Priya, thnx dear :)
AD, are you prepared to take it?cos the medicine works only if you are prepared!! :P thnx dear :)
Chandrika, thnx dear :)
Netika, saw that dear. wud do it :)
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