Wednesday, February 11, 2009

dream


her face was vibrant
pleasure sparkling her eyes
the pink on her face
added her charm

her smile was coy
her eyes frisky
her breathe had a rhythm
as she eased into her dreams

cupids are busy this month
she is yet to meet her match.
so how should he be?
thoughts grew wings to her words!

she hopes he be lofty
not insolent though
not a hunk, but good at heart
her grin said it all!
"i might be possessive at times"
sporadic resurgence of enthusiasm.
"he should impress my mom
tough, but that's his test"

her eyes flickered
the moment was captured
the smile was gone
maybe she woke up from her dream

such a brief dream
yet not trifling!
anticipation in her eyes,
may her dream come true!

60 comments:

Femin Susan said...

Hi.....
What a dream........ you have a great poetic heart! Keep it coming! Good job!

Scrawler said...

sawan sir...please read my latest post

Akshat said...

Hey Anil...

The poem was good.....and the pic is very apt!!

Such dreams should never end!!!

Take Care

Pretty Me!! said...

perfect valentine mood for a girl :)

the pink orchid said...

oye sawan.... wowwwww!! :) what a wonderful poetry.!! me loved it... and you know what I am self-dedicating this poem to myself.. :P mish you.. c u around..

rantravereflect/ jane said...

cupids are busy this month- lol- how very true!

nice dream out there..-- hope she finds her dream man soon..

n btwww., mothers are not too hard to impress -- that's frm personal experience :)

Amrita~Ams said...

damn poetic buddy
:)
nice one

Vinnie said...

Sawan sweets, is this me who inspired u?? tell me tell me...

Renu M said...

blog in the valentine mood!!!

WarmSunshine said...

Wowie

Had fun reading this one... had a widddeeee smile reading it till the end :)

lovely! AND cute :P

Ankita Agrawal said...

beautiful poem...refreshing at apt time!!!

Keep coming such work :-D

www.enchantinganki.wordpress.com

yamini meduri said...

a dream of a young girl
is her reason to live
thinking and striving, all way round
to make it come true...!!!

nice poem Sawan...i felt the above lines after having read you.,..hope you like them..!!!

and your poem...it is cute..!!!

Nidhi said...

ncie post.
love is in the air!!

Freya said...

ahh, you captured my dream(minus the fourth stanza)!

Ria said...

wow nice poem buddy! :)

Kartz said...

*ahem* *ahem*

V-Day is nigh, and what a way to start welcoming it. ;)

Good one, mate.

Peace.

Senorita said...

@ Sawan... nice :)

swati said...

i too wish may her dream come true.. :) nice poem dear. n that too in sch an aura of v'day suits perfectly.

R.V said...

That was so cute.. Reminded me of all my friends and me who have similar dreams and hopes... Perfect for valentine :D

Meera said...

Very sweet:)

SMRITI said...

Oye...any chance this was inspired by me?? But we've never chatted apart from the blogs...this sounds like me O_O

It was nice :) The pic is gorgeous...beautiful

Keshi said...

I think my cupid is overdosed and sleeping somewhere lol!

Beautiful verse Sawan!

Keshi.

tulipspeaks said...

it's brilliant!
and u have a wonderful blog. congrats!


ammu.

Mithe said...

awww...great on anil. It was a sweet dream-befitting the season.

sawan said...

thnx Femin and welcome to this space..

sawan said...

Scrawler, read :P

sawan said...

Akshant, thnx bro. glad u liked it

sawan said...

Pratzi, yeah i shud say :P

sawan said...

Kajal, u r welcome to dedicate it to urself :P night shifts dear, miss ya too :P see ya 'round..

sawan said...

Jane, thnx yaar.. yeah?? mothers are not too hard to impress?? so wut do we do?? enlighten me :P

sawan said...

Amrita, thnx girlie :P

sawan said...

Vinnie darlin, this time it was some one at work.. but m sure the moments when we wud meet sure would inspire me :P

sawan said...

Renu, it sure is :P

sawan said...

Meher, keep that smile through out your life.. no one deserves it better than u..

sawan said...

Ankita, thnx yaar.. glad u liked it :)

sawan said...

yamini, those words were beautiful!! luvd it, thnx :)

sawan said...

Nidzie, it sure is :P

sawan said...

Freya, did I?? :P

sawan said...

Ria, thnx buddy :P

sawan said...

Kartz, thnx bro :)

sawan said...

Sen, thnk u :P

sawan said...

Swati, will pass on ur wishes. thnx :P

sawan said...

Rashi, glad u liked it :)u hav similar dreams?? :P every one wants guys to impress their mom? love is goin tough!! :(

sawan said...

Meera, glad u liked it girlie :)

sawan said...

smriti, wow, u hav similar dreams?? i am open to conversations which might inspire me :P

sawan said...

Keshi, lol,overdosed :P dont worry he wud be in full action on 14th :P

sawan said...

hey tulip, welcome to my space.. glad u liked it :) keep visiting me :P

sawan said...

Mithe, glad u liked it yaar.. thnx.. kepp visiting me :)

Saranya said...

Beautiful poem Sawan :) Luvd it! Very lovely :) Keep up.

sawan said...

Saranya, thnx yaar.. and luvd the video in ur new post :)

Margaret said...

Beautiful poem Sawan......

If only all our sweet dreams would come true........

Love your blog :)

ki said...

Ah!
Someone's in The Valentine's Day mood! ;)
Very nice! :D

sawan said...

Margaret, Thnx dear. Yeah, if only they came true :) thnx once again :)

sawan said...

Kirti!!! yeah, think that i got bit by some cupid while visiting some blogs :P

Keshi said...

yeah right, I think he was dead on the 14th lol!

see I was in this post too...so why did u say these days I need recommendations to visit ya?

Keshi.

sawan said...

Keshi girlie, do I need a reason to complain :P i cud and wud complain a lot to u.. u r a swthrt, aint u?? :P

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

It amazes me how well you are able to personify a girl's feelings! :)

sawan said...

Sami, i am happy i cud give justice to her thoughts :)

A Poetess said...

if wishes wr horses, beggars would be riders :D

sawan said...

Poetess, beggars would have tough competition even then :) people are so very greedy :P